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Stay Love by =Little-Saiyan:iconLittle-Saiyan:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Song


It’s already enough to be so far, but another world?
There is nothing there for you.
The grass is not as green and the sky not so blue.
No embrace as warm as mine…
Love…
Stay… Stay with me…

I was torn by such anger at you, hurting in you.
I scream and shout myself sore…
Weak and trembling now I am, forgive me.
There is no heart as sorry as mine.
Love….
Be… Be with me…

Such regret is mine, such tortured thoughts running.
The sweet dreams forsake me,
I forget, forget why I was so mad, just love,
Burning to be with you in sleep in life, in the light.
Love…
Stay… Stay with me…

My angel… my angel… my angel… it hurts…
It burns, it aches, it tears, I’m dying,
Don’t leave me!
Not here, not now, not ever!
Be with me love…
Stay… Stay with me, my love.
©2009 =Little-Saiyan
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Author's Comments

私の天使。 滞在。

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If you steal it you're fucked up.

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~sitbackandrelapse Apr 20, 2009, 8:28:34 AM
Very emotive :D i like it alot <3

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For diamonds do appear to be

Just like broken glass to me.

(I leave hearts, because i care <3)
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Mood: Love ~Tsukiakari-Hana Apr 20, 2009, 6:14:57 PM
Such powerful emotions. love, regret, longing.
Its brilliant

I also like the repetitive line.

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I will not fear, fear is the mind killer, I will face my fear, I will let it pass through me.
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~sitbackandrelapse Apr 21, 2009, 8:08:43 AM
Raw is the best kind. <3

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For diamonds do appear to be

Just like broken glass to me.

(I leave hearts, because i care <3)
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*bloodbootie Apr 29, 2009, 5:36:27 AM
JESUS CHRIST ON A BIKE you are getting even better at writting.
This is going straight to my favs. ^w^

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:fuzzydemon: Something,
Something, :fuzzydemon:
Bloodcandies.
:iconlittle-saiyan:
=Little-Saiyan Apr 29, 2009, 5:43:23 AM
Thank you very much. That one hurt a bit, believe me.

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"That's cheating you stole my word!!!"

"The falling Angels cry..."

:rose:-Ruru-:rose:
:iconbloodbootie:
*bloodbootie Apr 29, 2009, 5:54:22 AM
But its a very moving piece of writing that is.
Keep it up.

p.s. sorry about how long it took me to put a comment on it.

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:fuzzydemon: Something,
Something, :fuzzydemon:
Bloodcandies.
:iconlittle-saiyan:
=Little-Saiyan Apr 29, 2009, 7:24:49 AM
It's fine I don't keep a time limit on comments. I always appreciate comments whenever and wherever they appear.

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"That's cheating you stole my word!!!"

"The falling Angels cry..."

:rose:-Ruru-:rose:
:iconbloodbootie:
*bloodbootie Apr 30, 2009, 12:13:42 AM
Fair enough.

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:fuzzydemon: Something,
Something, :fuzzydemon:
Bloodcandies.
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